Thursday 22 March 2018

The Asteroid - Just a story I wrote



6 comments:

  1. Hi James V,
    I atttend panmure bridge schoool. I think your blog post is really good. I think you should add in a blurb to show what you have learnt from this learning. Good job on the great effort James V.

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    2. thanks Marieta
      i was trying my hardest and next story i will try.
      James

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  2. Hi James I think your post is really good but I think you can better and add a bit more and add a blurb

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  3. Hi James, This work is a well done, I think I agree with Lyric & Marieta/s comment next time you should add more description to your work so we know what you did.

    Joshua

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