Thursday, 22 March 2018

The Asteroid - Just a story I wrote



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  1. Marieta11 May 2018 at 14:49

    Hi James V,
    I atttend panmure bridge schoool. I think your blog post is really good. I think you should add in a blurb to show what you have learnt from this learning. Good job on the great effort James V.

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    2. Anonymous11 June 2018 at 09:37

      thanks Marieta
      i was trying my hardest and next story i will try.
      James

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  2. Lyric @ Panmure Bridge School22 May 2018 at 10:33

    Hi James I think your post is really good but I think you can better and add a bit more and add a blurb

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  3. Joshua Vilikoka9 August 2018 at 09:57

    Hi James, This work is a well done, I think I agree with Lyric & Marieta/s comment next time you should add more description to your work so we know what you did.

    Joshua

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