Ruin part 2

The Asteroid - Just a story I wrote

Describing a situation

I've been working on describing a situation. I've tried to give a picture in the mind of the reader. 😀

MOST DANGEROUS SITUATION

By James

Episode: TNT

Let me describe one of the dumbest situation’s from the dumbest time with a kid that was the dumbest of the dumb...

Once upon a time a person fell into a hole (near some other holes) with TNT in it.
A wee bit away, a very dumb kid was walking down a hill, and tripped and landed next to a huge brown button.
"Ouch!" he said.
With no time wasted, he made a decision. He was going to press that button. Then he heard a voice from out of the dark gloomy hole.
“Don’t press the button!”
He thought it was his imagination, so he pressed it. It was actually the electricity dispenser, so all the power went out and he heard the voice again.
“Good. Now go and get a ladder please.”

Oooh, he saw another button and walked over to it.
“Is this the ladder?” he asked.
“No!!!”
“Yes? Ok.”
He pressed the button and the hole exploded!
“Well good bye” he said, just before he teetered back and fell into another hole...

...A wee bit away, a very dumb kid was walking down a hill, and tripped and landed next to a huge brown button...

About me 2018